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Longing

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"Honey? Is it done yet?" I hear my husbands soothing voice coming from the bathroom.

"Nope!" I try to say enthusiastically, but end up being skiddish.

"It takes a while," I say while leaning on the bathroom doorframe, looking at him.

He's sitting on the edge of the bed, eyebrows raised- looking hopeful.
I glance down at the test, seeing the 'negative' sign.
Again...
and again.
The doctors had said I had very slim chance I could have a child, but still a chance.
It's all I've ever wanted.
A child, of my own.
Me and my supportive husband have been trying for God knows how long, to no avail.
I keep seeing the 'negative' sign, over and over, it's almost brought me to tears.
I still have that slim chance.
That slim hope.
One day, I will have a child of my own.
alright, so I've been trying to write lately, and Sims 3 is really great inspiration..

So, since my Sim had the big family lifetime wish, I decided it'd be good to go ahead and make them have a kid. I had already built the room, the furniture, and the toys (in the preview picture).
but, she wouldn't get pregnant. and yes, I did wait a while, tried lots of times, and I even tried a damn cheat. and restarted the game! but I knew there was the chance, because they're sims, so they kept trying.

that's what inspired this short thing..

I would LOVE feedback because it's one of my first short stories thing. I'm still learning and I want to improve :clap:
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JoyfulJ's avatar
Nice story, I really like how it tells of troubles that some people have, but are unwilling to give into those troubles.